Spring break was not as much fun as I planned
I sat around all day wishing to play
Sometimes were super, some were very bland
I went outside and laid during the day
I was hoping and wishing for a tan
I had a lot of weird and stupid chores
I wish it was hot enough for a fan
My mom would even have me wash the doors
Oreo's were my favorite this break
K's park was the best when boredom would reach
Sat inside so much I got a head ache
Stayed home while people were at the beach
We would walk around town and have some fun
I saw a dude with a righteous man bun
This poem was neat
ReplyDeleteA bit more rhyme
but the explanation was too discrete
but other then that, there was no crime
Dear Abby,
ReplyDeleteYour poem had a beautiful flow
You had an interesting break, you must know
Even so, try to use unique words
Jumble it up, rearrange like a flock of birds
Your poem is amazing
ReplyDeleteIt was blazing
Try to improve on some words
If you did it would fly like birds